Now the image is getting clearer, and it's easier to form an attitude toward the thing. It can be a lime green velvet La-Z-Boy rocker recliner with a cigarette burn on the left arm and a crushed jelly doughnut pressed into the back edge of the seat cushion.
Did we learn how to engage our readers? People held their breath in gratitude, hardly daring to speak of the deluge, lest it should suddenly stop and the dryness return. If we want to share our big ideas without boring our readers to tears, we have to mix abstract advice with concrete imagery.
A woman cradled him in her arms as paramedics rushed to the scene before whisking Quamari away to hospital. Also, it's important to limit your term before you start defining it. But the big picture only comes alive with specific examples and stories.